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You're hurt now,
And I'm the cause,
Your smiles fade to frowns,
And it's all because,
I was without conscience,
I was without heart,
Now I want to say I'm sorry,
But I don't know where to start.

Words really can't express,
The sorrow that I feel,
For every tear you shed,
When my mouth had met my heel,
Friends are supposed to love you,
Friends are supposed to care,
But where the hell was I,
When you needed me there?
I was there alright,
But not there as a friend,
I was just some stupid guy,
Brining your happiness to an end.

I'm sorry that I've hurt you,
I'm sorry that you've cried,
I'm sorry that I'm not a friend,
In whom you can confide,
I wish that things were different,
I wish that things were fine,
But to my dismay I can't go back,
And change things through the sands of time.

All I can do is say I'm sorry,
For that is what I truly am,
If it helps then you should know,
I will do the best I can,
To hold my tongue from now on,
And to never hurt you again.
©2004-2009 ~xyrylis
:iconxyrylis:

Author's Comments

Long story short, the girl I wrote this about I did NOT have a crush on. It's a very complicated situation. A friend of hers vented to me about what a bitch she was and I agreed. Being the wimp that I was, I wrote this as an apology to her. Her friend got off scot free though, cause she's a girl. If I could I would take back the apology but keep this. In my opinion it's the best work I've ever done. I'm just sorry it had to be wasted on her.

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:icondareyoutomove121:
I really like this poem, Dave.I loved it when you had it on your other account, and I am glad to see it again :+fav:

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"Heroes are made when you make a choice"
:icondareyoutomove121:
I really like this poem, Dave.I loved it when you had it on your other account, and I am glad to see it again :+fav:

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"Heroes are made when you make a choice"
:iconcollected-dark:
i like this poem, it flows freely, its really simple and apt

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"It's unfortunate what we find pleasing to the touch and pleasing to the eye is seldom the same."
- Fabienne (Pulp Fiction)
:iconzedman:
Awesome piece dude :)

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"WinD'OHs -- OS of Homer Simpson" -- Shane Semler
:iconpaindeepinside:
This is really well written. I love the way it flows.
:icontoboerox:
love it im giving it to a friend at school i hurt her feelings badly
:iconspartan1337:
Wow, it's really nice, I feel exactly the same way.......... I can't believe what I did....

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A Brand new start.............
:iconmani19791:
aah! its nice...i m sharing it with a frnd whom i hurt

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